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about the swing that won't stop swinging it's blue someone should be on it rocks are everywhere I'm barefoot my feet have begun to bleed I look around no one ...

i'm flattering, darling, really. in fact, i'd say i'm laughing so hard i can barely breathe :lol: never get yourself down so much. you really aren't that bad of a ...

um was that directed at me? if it was or wasnt, i thought it was one of the better things you've written.

I don’t want to be frank It’s not like me be blunt Not like me take stabbing attempts At wounded, young innocents But I’m tired And I’ve wasted grains of ...

Oh, mother, I am weeping Besides your doorway, Lips shaking silence Still I am keeping every secret scent away Into the deep corners of my room – The searches, things ...

haha sorry - that's what spellcheck will do to you, Griffinkeeper. thanks.

good rant...bad poem. You're the bossy pushy son of a -- No, you're not. Grandma is much more nicer than you She doesn't tell me what's what Unless I ASK ...

And the souls can't flee. this line sounded awkward to me. otherwise, i most definitely think you should pusue poetry. you have a good taste for it.

ummm. well, there is no rhythm. or if there is, i have to read it really...oddly. if that's correct grammar, which i doubt... clean rooms stink! not very poetic. its ...

It’s quite hilarious, is it not? That I, a mere stranger writes about you so I dare not mock But the deviousness of it all makes the giggles all the ...

i liked the incorporation of the poem "Tyger, tyger" - i am unsure who it is by, but I am certain I've read it before. The rhyme/rhythm in this section ...

enjoyed the revised. good.

thanks. you learn something new everyday.

i'm sorry i forgot punctuation again! :cry:

I dream what we’ll go out for coffee sometime Licking cups, licking lips You may be older, but I’m Mature – I am star figurine of middle school I barely ...